THE REVIEW of 'SONGS OF PEACE'
A Poem by Charles David Ogbeche
Reviewer: Malaya Kumar Jati
Organizer: Global Literary Society
Arbiter: Bhagirath Choudhary ji
It gives me happiness to share with you my beloved friends, the review of my poem, a subsidiary of most reacted poems from the Global Literary Society, Founded by revered Bhagirath Choudhary ji whose continual selflessness i have been chanced to merit amongst the forum.
Below is the poem before Synopsis and Proper Review;
'S O N G S O F P E A C E'
Tis writ's the best marches upon mules into the desert,
Countries and homes infested with hostile and disdain,
Men marching forth on elegant hymns; caravans and pilgrim,
Let the cadence crunch by the vibes of the restless trampler,
Brothers with peace banner unfurled by the city outskirts,
Soldiers to defend and daises to lead with positive thoughts,
And Oh' chanting along the songs of peace in their amber,
The cloud may furnish blue and rays of lights leaping divine,
Then men who wholly around odious instincts that's fanciest,
May turn their palms towards the mold of unfading tranquil,
Let the universe turn with a heavy noisy gait against vices,
Marching on tunes by regulated minuet, waltz and cotillon,
For those whose worth is recompense and unfailing help,
May rise with the breath of the oceans and limbs of the winds,
Singing along with the pained shield of their souls renewed,
The flapping breeze to blow all wistful and intense memories,
The Heavenly downpour to refresh and wash the teary eyes,
All desires; a living life to live, and all pains; the thrill to peace,
Deeds fordone; a perfect future, songs of peace; all days joy,
And earth a haven for the sojourn and unborn facts of life.
Countries and homes infested with hostile and disdain,
Men marching forth on elegant hymns; caravans and pilgrim,
Let the cadence crunch by the vibes of the restless trampler,
Brothers with peace banner unfurled by the city outskirts,
Soldiers to defend and daises to lead with positive thoughts,
And Oh' chanting along the songs of peace in their amber,
The cloud may furnish blue and rays of lights leaping divine,
Then men who wholly around odious instincts that's fanciest,
May turn their palms towards the mold of unfading tranquil,
Let the universe turn with a heavy noisy gait against vices,
Marching on tunes by regulated minuet, waltz and cotillon,
For those whose worth is recompense and unfailing help,
May rise with the breath of the oceans and limbs of the winds,
Singing along with the pained shield of their souls renewed,
The flapping breeze to blow all wistful and intense memories,
The Heavenly downpour to refresh and wash the teary eyes,
All desires; a living life to live, and all pains; the thrill to peace,
Deeds fordone; a perfect future, songs of peace; all days joy,
And earth a haven for the sojourn and unborn facts of life.
© Charles David
02/02/2020
Nigerian Copyright Act.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Adorable young poet and the awardee of the TOP POET OF THE MONTH JANUARY, 2020 of GLOBAL LITERARY SOCIETY.
Your beautiful poem titled "S O N G S O F P E A C E" sings the psalm of peace to echo in every pros and cons of the world through your poetic vibes. The fact is that the flag of science is flying sky-high representing our amelioration in the field of science. The clarion of technology is blown everywhere that is symbolic of our technical uplift. Human civilization has undergone a sea change undoubtedly in the process of evolution.
This profound or notable transformation has not been able to restore peace in human sphere. Our modern life is marked by serious restlessness and incessant unrest lacking in bliss and peace. We modern humans have lost our peace in hurly-burly or hubbub of our boisterously mechanical life that often makes people come out to the streets with the banners of peace along with thunderous slogans. Their rebellious voices are reverberating in the firmament of mankind, but in vain.
The so-called hooligans, hardcore criminals, terrorists ,underworld dons or the merchants of death are shattering the peace of the earth by expanding their ever-expanding empire of evil. Here in this poem the poet laments over such loss of grace of mankind. We humans have deprived ourselves of the elixir of life by our sheer recklessness and infatuation towards devilish acts and pagan beliefs.
The poet in the concluding portion of this extremely beautiful poem gives expressions to his fervent wish of the restoration of peace to make our earth a heaven to live in with integrity, peace and harmony. May the poet's aspirations bloom with the touch of reality!
The poet in the concluding portion of this extremely beautiful poem gives expressions to his fervent wish of the restoration of peace to make our earth a heaven to live in with integrity, peace and harmony. May the poet's aspirations bloom with the touch of reality!
Kudos to you dear honourable poet for composing such a stellar poem to blow the conch of peace and harmony in the hearts of your readers to come forward for a greater cause of humanity to bring heaven down to the earth by our harmonious living and peaceful co-existence.
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Reviewer, Global Literary Society
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